Class feedback for our rough cut

Strengths
A clear establishment of the genre.(Thriller)
Included idents.
Lighting was good in some of the shots. (Close-ups)
Range of shot types.

Weaknesses
Commit to one type of title sequence- moving picture or discrete.
Jump cuts may have tiny gaps in between them.
Establishment of the location.

From the feedback, we have taken the advise from our peers and our teacher to improve our title sequence. There are some areas of our rough cut where we need to finalise some shots through editing and to remove shots which are less effective than others. We believe that our main success is portraying the story and adding variety of shots.